member's works thread

[crazyassmetalhead]

we have the poetry discussion thread, but that only works for poetry we all right, plus other people's shit....

then there's charlee's thread, but that's just for his shit...


so here's a new thread, for all the member of this site to share various literary works.....if they feel so inclined.

so share your shit. if you want to.



i'm pissed off again so i've been writing the past week or so, random shit come to mind and i write it down. this came to me as i was trying to sleep, and in a pissed off/depressed mood as usual....
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no real will to live
but i'm still here anyway
not much to give
yet i stay

life still fucking sucks
so i live in denial
a state of constant flux
doesn't matter i'll be dead in a while

do you care, that i don't care?
cause i don't care if you care or not.
i'm not fair? life's not fair.
but in death we all rot.



not done yet i don't think, might make a decent song if i can get more of it.
i have a bunch of random shit like this, unfinished angry poems/songs or whatever, maybe just angry rantings. i'll try to post some more if you guys want. course if it sucks just say so, it'll make me a better writer. or just piss me off, which is what motivates me anyways, so it's a win win thing.


now share some of your writings, whatever they be...

[exial]

i will walk troubled streets in search of my ultimate feat.
i seek for that which longs to be released

that which i will die to keep,
that which is forgotten but not dead to me

check these words for their rythm is too deep,
my soul is laid bare in this beat.
is it too dark to see? I am a modern nomad in a land which no longer breathes..

i walk empty streets in search of that which i seek.
Beneath these howling stars lie a story too deep...
a story too sad to repeat.

In this valley of lost dreams lies a truth we chose not to see.
A truth that borders on insanity a truth i long to reveal,

look deep in the stars and you will see..
its time we rise to that which we subconsiouly despise,

and stop fighting that which gives us life.
Its time we rise to that which we subconsiously despise..
Or choose the easy way out..

-exial.

[crazyassmetalhead]

"look deep in the stars and you will see..
its time we rise to that which we subconsiouly despise,

and stop fighting that which gives us life.
Its time we rise to that which we subconsiously despise..
Or choose the easy way out"


i like this part a lot, but i'm not sure exactly what it means

[Cake]

Fuggit. that sucked...nm.....

Ill write a song and make chords n put it up here


Es Muy Horible!

[charlee]

Cakes rhymes should be considered crimes,
not worth a dollar, let alone a dime,
we will soon come to find,
to write a poem, open your mind,
but he is cake is he not,
does a cake not feel, emote, or have thought?,
Damnit cake, you fucking twat,
you s***l as bad or worse then assrot.

[crazyassmetalhead]

lol .

[ItsAPoorlyKeptSecret]

uh-oh I feel another amateur freestyle rap thingy coming on again...the one in LBT was pretty funny that one night...

[exial]

"look deep in the stars and you will see..
its time we rise to that which we subconsiouly despise,

and stop fighting that which gives us life.
Its time we rise to that which we subconsiously despise..
Or choose the easy way out"


i like this part a lot, but i'm not sure exactly what it means

that makes to of us.

[a2thae]

uh-oh I feel another amateur freestyle rap thingy coming on again...the one in LBT was pretty funny that one night...

I forgot about this hahaha...if only this were a rap thread.

[charlee]

Done and done, Shall i post it in literature or rap?

[crazyassmetalhead]

rap is poetry...

usually just shitty poetry about bitches and money. but still.

and poetry is literature.

[charlee]

well here goes shit.

The acb, is were i be,
i got no cars, ice, or tv's,
this place is funny all dudes and no hunny's
who'd pay money for sumthin faker the an easter bunny,
not me that you can quote,
but diverse ass a cake that can emote,
haha this sucks but do you think that i care,
ill walk out in the street with a thong on and stare,
blankly at the crowds around my position,
maybe if i blew my brains out they'd listen,
or not whatever ill be high again tomarrow,
while you preppy muh-fuckaz drown within your sorrow.

[exial]

Rap Battle.

Charlee vs. exial

Yo im on the ACB and im smoking trees
Hitting up these forums like it aint no breeze.
Fuck you charlee you aint ready fo me.
Hittin you up like a paper sheet
dont mess with me my freestyle is too sweet.

[exial]

wait ill make a new thread.

[charlee]

But i have 2 go soon. But i will post one more to finish this.

[exial]

An all out battle between charlee and me.