Poetry, Lyrics, and What not

[Rasta_Man]

Put down your poetry and stuff like that here:

Here is something I wrote today which I quite like, tell me what you think.

Do I detect some density?, sensibly no sense in me,
Tell me whats the recipe, how can there be less of me?,
Less than one, maybe none, all for fear, or all for fun,
Glad to add to my addiction, fighting against the friction,
Artificially addressed, im blessed to be possessed,
Manifest into a quest, to test who is the best,
Racists with mad faces, poor kids with out shoe laces,
Tell me where your faith is, when priests turn into rapists,

[clyde.morris0217]

that sounds kinda sweet...
only I don't like the "fight against the friction" part, but that's just me

[illegal543]

yeah dude just do something else with the fighting against the friction part and its perfect.
I have some lyrics for some songs ive written ill post later if i think about it

[Fuck_the_Pigs]

that sounds kinda sweet...
only I don't like the "fight against the friction" part, but that's just me

word. how about like: living lives of fiction or fighting against restriction

[clyde.morris0217]

word. how about like: living lives of fiction or fighting against restriction

yeah! that's perfect

[Fuck_the_Pigs]

I kno, I'm so good.

which 1 is better???

haha I'm workin on my own song rite now. I'm having some difficulty w/the b***** cause its 4 the piano. I've been playin for 9 years sooooo ya. It's chill.